Your persepctive is excellent, Hannah, and the writing is very good. Each "page" sets up the reader to anticipate the next page. This is a lot harder than it seems and is key if you ever wanted to do a daily comic strip.
I know that art work varies from generation and this old comic book fanboy (52 years old next month) thought the art could use some "shaping." But I doubt you are writing for someone my age, so pay more attention to the opinion of your intended audience.
Though I wouldn't give the art highest marks, Story-telling, plotting, and picture juxtaposition all get an "A."
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Cool Comic! The frist frame at the hospital is very well drawn. The story is developing well can't wait for the next installment
Your persepctive is excellent, Hannah, and the writing is very good. Each "page" sets up the reader to anticipate the next page. This is a lot harder than it seems and is key if you ever wanted to do a daily comic strip.
I know that art work varies from generation and this old comic book fanboy (52 years old next month) thought the art could use some "shaping." But I doubt you are writing for someone my age, so pay more attention to the opinion of your intended audience.
Though I wouldn't give the art highest marks, Story-telling, plotting, and picture juxtaposition all get an "A."
Good luck.
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